roche of course is just a kid (he’s 15) but something i am kind of worried about is, with the way ive been writing him, he is too unlikeable and you just want to see him suffer
if he gets to that point of unlikeability im gonna go through and edit some of his dialogue

his actions will remain the same, but i dont want him to be the literal worst, i just want him to seem like a sheltered teenager
if you have any thoughts lmk (latest page as of posting this was page 98)